an Outline for Grace and mystery in the commercial "L'Eau par Kenzo"

Introductory Paragraph
Begin with an interesting quotation related to your opinion about new ideas through visual effects based on my commercial
(You will need a transition here)
- End the Intro paragraph with your thesis statement:
Even though our cultural backgrounds and our own personalities make us often resist the new ideas that a video tries to tell us, a powerful video should inspire us to think differently through its visual aspect because it is a piece of art and each video is first of all what we see.
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Body Paragraph #1
Topic of the body thesis:
our cultural backgrounds and our own personalities make us often resist the new ideas that a video tries to tell us
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that our cultural backgrounds and our own personalities make us often resist the new ideas that a video tries to tell us is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.

Body Paragraph #2
Even though our cultural backgrounds and our own personalities make us often resist the new ideas that a video tries to tell us, a powerful video should inspire us to think differently through its visual aspect because it is a piece of art.
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that it is a piece of art is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.

Body Paragraph #3
The most important reason a powerful video should inspire us to think differently through its visual aspect is because each video is first of all what we see.
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that each video is first of all what we see is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.

Conclusion
So you can see that although our cultural backgrounds and our own personalities make us often resist the new ideas that a video tries to tell us, a powerful video should inspire us to think differently through its visual aspect for two main reasons. First, it is a piece of art. But most importantly, each video is first of all what we see.
- Now you will return to your attention-getter from the introduction
- Then end your essay with a powerful So What? statement that shows why the reader should care about this.