Tuesday, November 20, 2007
Research topic
I am going to extend paper 2 and research about cultural diversity in America: statistics, facts and articles.
Tuesday, November 6, 2007
A sceleton for "Learn from the dead to stay alive"
Introductory Paragraph
Begin with an interesting quotation related to your opinion about facing a tragedy with honor
(You will need a transition here)
- End the Intro paragraph with your thesis statement:
Even though historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals, a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories because any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions and analyzis of a historical tragedy is a necessary lesson for the new generations to be more prepared for the future.
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Body Paragraph #1
Topic of the body thesis:
historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals
- Germans wanted to completely destroy the Berliin wall in order to forget about the fact of its existense (Laid)
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentense
- According to Bruno Bettelheim, many people did not want to believe in existense of Nazi concentration and death camps because they feared to face a horror reality occured in the past.
Body Paragraph #2
Even though historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals, a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories because any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions.
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Body Paragraph #3
The most important reason a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories is because analyzis of a historical tragedy is a necessary lesson for the new generations to be more prepared for the future.
- According to Laid, the Berlin Wall that physically separated one nation for years, united it and made strong as never before.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
"The ignored Lesson of Anne Frank" tells that those Jews who survived Nazi Germany realized that an active fight till the end is the only way to face and stop evil.
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Conclusion
So you can see that although historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals, a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories for two main reasons. First, any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions. But most importantly, analyzis of a historical tragedy is a necessary lesson for the new generations to be more prepared for the future.
- Now you will return to your attention-getter from the introduction
After all said, the last and probably most necessary way to think about the past tragedies in the history and the way to live in the future is to believe that there is more good than bad in the world as little Anne believed that "people are good at heart".
Begin with an interesting quotation related to your opinion about facing a tragedy with honor
(You will need a transition here)
- End the Intro paragraph with your thesis statement:
Even though historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals, a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories because any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions and analyzis of a historical tragedy is a necessary lesson for the new generations to be more prepared for the future.
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Body Paragraph #1
Topic of the body thesis:
historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals
- Germans wanted to completely destroy the Berliin wall in order to forget about the fact of its existense (Laid)
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentense
- According to Bruno Bettelheim, many people did not want to believe in existense of Nazi concentration and death camps because they feared to face a horror reality occured in the past.
Body Paragraph #2
Even though historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals, a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories because any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions.
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Body Paragraph #3
The most important reason a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories is because analyzis of a historical tragedy is a necessary lesson for the new generations to be more prepared for the future.
- According to Laid, the Berlin Wall that physically separated one nation for years, united it and made strong as never before.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
"The ignored Lesson of Anne Frank" tells that those Jews who survived Nazi Germany realized that an active fight till the end is the only way to face and stop evil.
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Conclusion
So you can see that although historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals, a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories for two main reasons. First, any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions. But most importantly, analyzis of a historical tragedy is a necessary lesson for the new generations to be more prepared for the future.
- Now you will return to your attention-getter from the introduction
After all said, the last and probably most necessary way to think about the past tragedies in the history and the way to live in the future is to believe that there is more good than bad in the world as little Anne believed that "people are good at heart".
Thesis for paper 3
Even though historical tragedies are very hard to talk and think about for the survivals, a people can learn more from its past tragedies than glories because any historical tragedy related to war teaches peoples always to look for pieceful resolutions and analyzis of a historical tragedy is a necessary lesson for the new generations to be more prepared for the future.
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